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The 12 Most Common Landing Page Mistakes (And What To Do Instead)

Underperforming landing pages usually fail for the same dozen reasons. Here is each one, what to do instead, and how to audit your own page in twenty minutes.

23 Jul 20265 min read
The 12 Most Common Landing Page Mistakes (And What To Do Instead)

Your page is live, the traffic is arriving, and almost nobody is filling in the form. The instinct at that point is to assume the design is wrong and start again, which is the most expensive possible response to a problem that is usually much smaller than a redesign.

Underperforming pages tend to fail for the same dozen reasons. Eleven of them can be fixed in an afternoon by editing text, deleting things and shortening a form. Work through them in order before you commission anything new.

Mistakes one to four: the offer and the headline

The headline does not repeat the promise that got the click. The ad said same-day locksmith, no call-out fee. The page says Quality Locksmith Services You Can Trust. The visitor now has to verify for themselves that they are in the right place. Instead, put the words from the ad in the first line of the page, more or less verbatim. Matching beats cleverness.

There is no offer, only an invitation. "Learn more", "find out how we can help" and "get in touch" ask the reader to start a conversation with no idea where it ends. Name the thing they get: a free survey, a fixed-price service at a stated figure, a fifteen-minute call, a quote within one working day.

The page opens with you rather than the reader. Established in 2009, we are a family-run firm committed to excellence. True, and irrelevant to someone whose priority is the leak. Open with their situation and what you will do about it. Your history belongs further down, as proof.

The price is hidden when price is the first question. If the visitor’s opening thought is "what does this cost", a page that never mentions money reads as evasive. You do not need an exact figure. A range, a starting price or a clear statement of what determines the cost all do the job.

Mistakes five to eight: structure, length and navigation

The full site navigation is still at the top. Every menu item is an invitation to go somewhere other than the thing you paid for the click to reach. Take the menu off. Keep the logo, and if you need a route back to the main site, one small link in the footer is enough.

The action appears once, at the very bottom. A reader who becomes convinced halfway down has nowhere to act. Repeat the action at the natural decision points (after the offer, after the proof, at the end), all pointing at the same form.

Length was chosen by taste rather than by commitment. A £6,000 installation sold in forty words feels flimsy; an email signup wrapped in fourteen hundred words feels like homework. Match the amount of page to the size of the ask, and cut anything a careful buyer would not need before saying yes.

Everything the business does ended up on the page. The ad was about one service, and the page also covers the other five, plus recruitment, plus the newsletter. Each addition competes with the one thing you want. One page, one offer; the rest of the catalogue lives on the website.

Mistakes nine to twelve: the form, the button and the mobile view

The form asks for more than you need. Eight fields to request a callback is a negotiation, not a form. Ask for the minimum that makes your next contact useful: a name, one contact detail, and one thing that helps you prepare. Everything else can be asked on the phone.

The button says "Submit". It describes what the software does, not what the reader gets. Book my free survey or Send my quote request restates the offer at the moment of the click, which is when hesitation peaks.

The mobile layout was inherited rather than designed. A hero image sized for a laptop can push the form two screens down on a phone. Text set at a desktop size becomes a wall. Fields set to the wrong input type bring up the letter keyboard for a phone number. Open the page on an actual handset, thumb through it, and fix what annoys you.

The page is heavy on a phone connection. Full-width photography straight from a camera, three web fonts, a video header and a chat widget all load before anyone reads a word. On a good office connection you will never notice. On mobile data at the edge of coverage, the visitor leaves before the headline paints. Compress the images, cut the widgets you are not using, and test it away from your desk.

How to audit your own page in twenty minutes

Open the page on your phone, on mobile data, and start a timer. Do not scroll yet.

Read only what is on the first screen. Can you tell what is being offered, who it is for, and what you are meant to do? If any of the three is missing, that is your first fix.

Now click your own ad or email link. Read the ad text and the page headline one after the other. If they do not share their main words, rewrite the headline.

Count the exits. Menu items, footer links, social icons, phone numbers pointing elsewhere. Every one is a way out. Decide which genuinely need to stay.

Count the form fields and remove one. Then look at whether you could remove another. Ask what you would actually do differently with the answer to each.

Read the button text aloud. If it does not say what the reader receives, change it.

Finally, scroll to the bottom slowly and note the first place you get bored. That is where most of your readers stopped too.

Which fixes to make first

Headline match, then offer clarity, then form length. Those three cost nothing but attention and account for most of the gap between a page that produces enquiries and one that does not. Removing the navigation is a close fourth, and takes minutes.

Speed and mobile layout come next, because they need slightly more care. Anything involving a redesign comes last, if at all, and after the first four are done, it usually turns out not to be needed.

If the list above looks like an afternoon you will never quite get to, that is the sort of tidying our maintenance plans exist to absorb: small, specific edits to a page that already works, made without you having to open the builder yourself.

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